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Monday, June 10, 2019

Life as a shark Free Writing

This week of free writing I'm pretending I'm a shark. Hope you enjoy. First week back in term 3 hope everyone is starting off the term well. I certainly am finishing off me as a shark. Enjoy!  Oh man!! Life as a shark can I tell you about it! In my mothers stomach death came close. Now out of her stomach she tried to eat me! But I've grown now, that's only a memmory. Now all I care about is chomping on other fishes, it's so fun! Today I'm of to find a group of Marlins, that will make a good breakfast. Down into my cave I found some little fishes. I was going to eat them but that wouldn't be enough for breakfast, anyway they can grow and have more babies for me to eat. Where the Marlins always are, near the shores well that's were I always find them. A perfect breakfast, I think should eat Marlins more often. I still can't get that memmory out of my head, what if I run into one of my brothers. But still that is just a memmory and for now I'm of for a nap.What a horrific sleep. I dreamed of me meeting my brother and fighting him, I just hopes that never happens. Once againg off to find some Marlins, but well I was at it I met a fellow shark. Right then, I realised the pattern on his head...                                               ...It was my brother. I was shocked that we had actually met. It looked like he hadn't had breakfast yet so I asked him if he was searching for Marlins, and sure enough he was. I told him I was also huntig for Marlins and if he wanted to join me. He did so we went off to search. Rethinking, I shouldn't have been scared of my braother I think it was realised that he was actually a really nice guy. After a nice day of hunting down Marlins, playing tag and catch your own tail. After tiring ourselves out we went to sleep, I hoped him a good night and we both went off home.The next morning I woke up and headed straight to his little shack, since I'd forgotten I asked him what his name was. What I was expecting he didn't reply. He was asleep he woke up and a fight started!!! WHAT!!! Ohh, it was only a dream. So I went back to sleep and never woke up again!!

1 comment:

  1. What an interesting viewpoint. I like that you, as a shark, still think of the importance of not over fishing and allowing fish to breed. Maybe next time you could try adding some descriptive language into your writing, maybe a simile, metaphor or personification.

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