Plans for stopping the invisible guy
No one ever new where he would be so whole of the last night Cooper planed a way to stop the invisible guy, but the invisible guy was watching him that whole time but little did he know that was his homework he had already planned his way of getting out, after a minute of the invisible guy not being there he assumed he was gone and pulled out his real plans, it read I’m sure he’ll be watching me this whole time I have set up a metal rope I will swing this metal rope around and catch him press the electrician button and pour visible potion on him. No one ever beat him and also he wasn’t born invisible he was doing science for 27 years he is 35 now this is when he is 29, in his years of doing science he failed a test to find the cure for cancer and made and invisible potion. He tried it on his friend who had cancer by the name of Jack as the drop hit him it made him disappear, well that’s what everyone thought he actually went invisible he went to The “visible” guys house and told him that went invisible and his cancer got removed by the doctor somehow I don’t really know how he was invisible. The “visible” guy thought he could become unable to die, this is how he got his name, for the last 6 years he has been invisible.
Invisible guy gets defeated
Breakfast was all set up and ready Cooper was an Einstein one of the smartest people on earth and made “seeing invisible people goggles” Cooper saw the invisible guy (Who was visible to Cooper) got him in the metal rope pressed the electrician button jumped on the table jumped write above him threw the visible potion on him smashed the door open and ran out. The invisible guy (visible) went to jail. Cooper saved people and was famous after defeating the invisible guy, he was basically the coolest person in the world. Out of the hundreds and thousands of people to live in the haunted house with the invisible guy.
Friendship gets made
4 years later Robertson (the invisible guy) wanted to be friends with Cooper, Cooper had a quick think about it. Robertson said "Please oh please Cooper all i wanted is a friend" Cooper thought "could this be a prank after 6 years he had been a bad person but this could be an opportunity to get rid of one of the bad guys." "Okay" Cooper replied, "finally a friend all I wanted was for people to appreciate me but I failed and made the world a badder place I am so sorry." Cooper took him to the haunted house although it was not haunted and had a lot of changes. "Wow this is such an improvement, could I live with you Cooper" Yes sure you can Cooper replied. Oh thank you so much Cooper
Fight crime
After Cooper and Robertson became best friends they both became policemen so they were stopping bad guys and saving people and they both got a police dog! After this they were both famous and they were the coolest people ever.
Invisible man part two
They were a great policemen combo, but a new invisible man had came to mess with them. Cooper and Robertson were both great scientists so they thought this would be easy. even easier since Cooper still had his seeing invisible googles. The new invisible guy was even worst he wasn't in a haunted house, he was in the streets. So Cooper lured him into a house by shouting ¨If you want the coolest people come in the house. he came in Cooper saw him since he had the goggles on he saw him and the same thing Cooper caught him in the electrician rope pressed the electrician button poured the visible potion on and sent him to jail.
More friends
Cooper went to his brothers house with Robertson. Coopers brother is J´mahkus but he gets called Jj. Jj said hi Cooper and whispered ¨who´s this.¨ His name is Robertson. Hi Robertson I´m J´mahkus but you can call me Jj. Hi Jj Robertson replied. We have decided do stay down here for the night Jj¨. Come in i´ll give you a tour Robertson
Leaving their country
Cooper and Robertson decided to go to Thailand for their holidays they loaned their job for 3 months and left to Thailand. THE END
Wow Koda, what a cool idea for a story! I couldn't imagine living with an invisible person and not being able to see them! Maybe next time try to add some descriptive language to paint a picture in the reader's mind. Describe looks, feels, sounds, tastes, smells :)
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