This is my 4th challenge. in this challenge we were give a text that looke like this...
They had arrived out of the blue, catching everyone completely unaware.
Striding through the vast expanse of ocean as if it were nothing more than a shallow puddle, the trolls provided the gathering crowd on the cliff tops with a menacing spectacle. They were enormous! Grotesque!
The whole cliff shook as one of them crunched a meaty, clumsy hand the size of an elephant into the rock face…
...and were told to finish it of. Here is mine
...Everyone ran to try and get away but the trolls were big enough to catch up in one step. Unnatural shakes felling as if and earthquake had cracked the world in half. As everyone was running away a troll started crying and said "why does everyone hate me" and the trolls ran away.
I think I would be pretty scared if there were trolls striding around. Well done on completing so many challenges during the holidays.
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