Kia ora Koda, my name is Nikara I’m a year 6 student in Te Ngahere at Paihia School. I really like your post about Albert Einstein, I found it very interesting how he was born in Germany, I had no idea! I think your poster looked really cool, but I found it a tiny bit hard to clearly read the words, so another thing you could change is to make the background more simple to make the words more visible. Also what did you find hard when researching about Albert Einstein? Can’t wait to see more. Bye.
My name is Tayla and I am the Cluster Manager for the Summer Learning Journey in Kaikohekohe. Well done on completing your first activity - it looks great! I love all the colours you've used, it's very vibrant!
Although you've given some awesome facts about Albert Einstein, this activity actually asked you to look at two different images and describe one of them in detail, which you will need to do to receive points.
Why don't you have another look at the activity and choose one of the paintings to describe: https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities/2019-week-3-y6-8#h.p_YyRYgM8VEdXO
I'm looking forward to seeing your next post. You are very creative so I'm sure it will look awesome :)
Kia ora Koda! Olive from the Summer Learning Journey!
You've got some super great colours going on! I've also learned some really interesting facts about Albert! Ka pai on your creativity and hard work.
I notice you haven't been as active recently - maybe you're on holiday? Bad wifi connection? The dog ate your computer? Whatever the reason, my team and I would love to see more of your work! Don't give up, there are still two weeks of the program to go!
Kia ora Koda, my name is Mihipeka and I am a year 8 student that attends Paihia School. I really like your post, it is very colourful. I like how you set up your blog, it is very cool and eye catching. Albert Einstein is a very inspiring person. In your blog the writing was very difficult to see because of the bright colours you chose, but besides that it was very interesting and fun to write about your blog post.
Hi Koda! It's Mia :) (you're bestfriend) I love all of the colours that are used, very eyecatching. I love this information about this Albert Einstein, desibcres what he did and who he is.
Anyways if you would like too check out my learning then copy and paste this link address into google then, BOOM! There it is :)
Kia ora Koda, my name is Nikara I’m a year 6 student in Te Ngahere at Paihia School. I really like your post about Albert Einstein, I found it very interesting how he was born in Germany, I had no idea! I think your poster looked really cool, but I found it a tiny bit hard to clearly read the words, so another thing you could change is to make the background more simple to make the words more visible. Also what did you find hard when researching about Albert Einstein? Can’t wait to see more.
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Kia ora Koda,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tayla and I am the Cluster Manager for the Summer Learning Journey in Kaikohekohe. Well done on completing your first activity - it looks great! I love all the colours you've used, it's very vibrant!
Although you've given some awesome facts about Albert Einstein, this activity actually asked you to look at two different images and describe one of them in detail, which you will need to do to receive points.
Why don't you have another look at the activity and choose one of the paintings to describe:
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities/2019-week-3-y6-8#h.p_YyRYgM8VEdXO
I'm looking forward to seeing your next post. You are very creative so I'm sure it will look awesome :)
Ngā mihi,
Tayla
Kia ora Koda! Olive from the Summer Learning Journey!
ReplyDeleteYou've got some super great colours going on! I've also learned some really interesting facts about Albert! Ka pai on your creativity and hard work.
I notice you haven't been as active recently - maybe you're on holiday? Bad wifi connection? The dog ate your computer? Whatever the reason, my team and I would love to see more of your work! Don't give up, there are still two weeks of the program to go!
Ngā mihi,
Olive
Kia ora Koda, my name is Mihipeka and I am a year 8 student that attends Paihia School. I really like your post, it is very colourful. I like how you set up your blog, it is very cool and eye catching. Albert Einstein is a very inspiring person. In your blog the writing was very difficult to see because of the bright colours you chose, but besides that it was very interesting and fun to write about your blog post.
ReplyDeleteHi Koda! It's Mia :) (you're bestfriend) I love all of the colours that are used, very eyecatching. I love this information about this Albert Einstein, desibcres what he did and who he is.
ReplyDeleteAnyways if you would like too check out my learning then copy and paste this link address into google then, BOOM! There it is :)
Ciao Koda! :)
http://kpsmiat.blogspot.com/