We have been doing Anzac writing. We could choose exposition, fictional recout or factual report I picked fictional recount. Here is mine after 3 weeks:
I love this piece of writing Koda. You have used some great descriptive language and topical words to paint a picture in the reader's mind and have showed a good understanding of of the realities of the war our ANZACs fought in.
Hi my name is Isaac. I like your story, it's pretty cool. I think it's cool because of the illustrations about your writing. I also find spelling tricky, I use a cool online dictionary - www.wordhippo.com , try it out. Blog you later.
Kia ora Koda my name is Ben and I go to Paihia School. I like your piece of writing about ANZAC soldiers in Gallipoli. It was a great story and it intrigued me your visuals also intrigued me. At the end of the story what do you mean by the Australians had helped but not enough to defeat U.K, France and India because they were allies with the ANZACs. What did you enjoy most about doing the writing? Keep up the good blog posts.
I love this piece of writing Koda. You have used some great descriptive language and topical words to paint a picture in the reader's mind and have showed a good understanding of of the realities of the war our ANZACs fought in.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Isaac. I like your story, it's pretty cool. I think it's cool because of the illustrations about your writing. I also find spelling tricky, I use a cool online dictionary - www.wordhippo.com , try it out. Blog you later.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Koda my name is Ben and I go to Paihia School. I like your piece of writing about ANZAC soldiers in Gallipoli. It was a great story and it intrigued me your visuals also intrigued me. At the end of the story what do you mean by the Australians had helped but not enough to defeat U.K, France and India because they were allies with the ANZACs. What did you enjoy most about doing the writing? Keep up the good blog posts.
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