Today the 18th of November we wrote poems. We had to find a object in nature. I picked a smooth leaf. Then I wrote a poem, it was hard to make my poem rhyme but in the end it turned out pretty good.
Kia ora Koda it’s Dale from Paihia School. I really enjoyed your blog post because the poem was really catchy. Could you make it easier to read because I can’t see the words that well. We are not doing poems but we are reading and learning about the government/Parliament. Is this the first poem you’ve written? .Nice work keep it up. Blog ya later.
Kia ora kode, My name is Riccashaye. I'm a student from Tautoro school, and i'm a year 8. I enjoyed your poem. I liked how it rhymed. You also chose really cool vivid verbs. When I first read the first sentence of the poem it made me smile with joy. 'A hint of brown...never frown'. Ka rawe! It was nice to hear that information about the leaf. To be honest I never knew that information about the beautiful leaf. How long did it take you to write the poem? Blog you later. Riccashaye
Kia ora Koda it’s Dale from Paihia School. I really enjoyed your blog post because the poem was really catchy. Could you make it easier to read because I can’t see the words that well. We are not doing poems but we are reading and learning about the government/Parliament. Is this the first poem you’ve written? .Nice work keep it up. Blog ya later.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Riccashaye. I'm a student from Tautoro school, and i'm a year 8. I enjoyed your poem. I liked how it rhymed. You also chose really cool vivid verbs. When I first read the first sentence of the poem it made me smile with joy. 'A hint of brown...never frown'. Ka rawe! It was nice to hear that information about the leaf. To be honest I never knew that information about the beautiful leaf. How long did it take you to write the poem? Blog you later.
Riccashaye
Whoops. Sorry I spelt your name wrong Koda.
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